hey mama jones lol (slap on the knee) is it ok that my narative sounds like a diary entry?

Mama Jones!!!!!
Can I please change my narrative topic?? pretty pretty PRETTY!!!! please!!!
You were right it is hard to make it interesting, plus there are a lot of things that need explaining. I already have another topic picked out and it will work so much better.

~Kadie

So i posted this bc i thought it was funny that it was called Tonya Jones Spa and Ms. Jones works at a spa

So me and Mallory were watching The Hangover, and while we were watching it we noticed Of Mice and Men was sitting open on the totally hot Bradley Cooper's desk in his classroom((awesome)To quote Ms. Jones). Just thought we would share.

Sunday. Slept until twelve. That was awesome. Went grocery shopping. That was not awesome. Hung out with my dog: awesome. Went to my sister's house (awesome) and read magazines (awesome) and watched the first Harry Potter (not awesome) and she cooked dinner (awesome). That's more awesomes than not, so today was a win.

First official day of Spring Break for me. I was awakened by a frantic call from my second job at the spa wanting me to come in so I hopped in the shower and then when I got out I was greeted by a second call saying they didn't need me to come in. All showered and no place to go.

Ending up meeting my ma for lunch at J Mike's all the way in Monkey Junction. Ran a sandwich by a hungry friend's house. Now I'm back at the house because my dog needed parenting (you know, feeding, watering, letting her out). All in all, it was a good, relaxed day but with enough stuff that I had to get up, get showered and leave the house. I am sure at least one of the days to come will not involve all three of those things. I will test just how lazy I can be.

Help meeeee

What is the correct way to use effect and affect??